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Step 5: Rewrite the story from Step 4, but add 2-3 connectors that you have never used before. (See the "Chart of Connecting Words" on p 14 in the BASICs Handout.)
 * Writing Task 1: The Basics**

All of these connectors are in our textbooks, so if you are not sure how to use them, then look them up!

I Love It!!! Really!!! It's a great story. You guys have done a great job in connecting your ideas and using excellent vocabulary. I'll talk to you about it more on Monday. Good Job!

Title: My name is Alice. I am from Japan. I want to speak English very well, for I like to go to trip. Speaking Englsih is an important communication tool wherver you go,and you can know many foreigner friends and know the culture of other countries.When I was in high school student, I decided on my plan to go to the U.S. I came to the United States in September 18 by myself. I landed in Seattle airport ( Tacoma ), and then I stayed in Seattle for a night. As soon as I met a guy in the airport, I had good time with him. His name is Ryan, and he was also going to Portland.We decided to come to Portland by car together. It is about 200 miles from Seattle, so we talked a lot to each other. Ryan is from Saudi Arabia. Ryan wants to speak English too. I do not know about his culture, and he also do not know about my curture. We are really interested about each other's culture.In the future, I want to be flight attendant, and he wants to be a tour guide.When we were the international students in the U.S.I often asked him to come in for a chat.After than we know more about each other,so we become the best friend. We both think English is very important for a good job,because now many countries constitute English to become their second language. Learning English very well is not only you can go everywhere easy but also get better chances in your job. If you're looking for a job that can provide you a good position and a higher salary, understanding English often makes it a lot easier. In many big companies, you'll have a lot of opportunities to establish contact with foreigners may have a lot of appointments or meetings with them. If you wanna make a good living ,it can't be denied that.  So we studies English very hard to realize our goal.We usually went to library,and help each other to slove the English problems.We improved our English very fast.Two years later,we both finished our school,and then we came back our countries.We have a successful start in our careers. we all adore our work passionately and have determination and willpower to persist in the things we are doing.Finally,We have a our own successful companies.